Day is best known as a masterful prose writer. His novel Last Cattle
Drive is a classic of contemporary American frontier literature.
Less well known is the fact that Day received his M.F.A. from the
University of Arkansas in poetry writing. The grace of his style
indicates serious study of language. Whether he writes essays, articles,
novellas, or poetry, he understands aesthetics of style—balance,
invention, and timing. In “Teal Hunting with Two Old Uncles,” season and
place are clear.
The poem’s speaker
has an easy assurance, inviting readers into his low-key drama. The
young narrator contrasts with older uncles, as he performs the heavy
work of sodding the duck blind. The early autumn day reflects the
uncles’ mellow old age concerns of storytelling and casual drinking. For
them, their weapon of choice is a “rolled up” magazine. They create
their own oral history compendium, a parallel to the magazine, as the
young hunter goes about business. Years later, like the uncles, the
narrator remembers exactly what he shot on that trip, the “Blue wings”
and “Cinnamon.” With his uncles, he becomes like “old hunting dogs
loaded with dreams,” not so concerned with the hunt for meat as for the
distillation of memories into fine narratives.
TEAL HUNTING WITH TWO
September’s never cold enough for ducks and whiskey.
I shoot in Tee-shirt and moccasins
as green wings hustle from pond to pond
in the yellow morning.
My uncles miss chances, drinking
on the bench deep in
swapping stories about Cheyenne Bottoms
and Snow Geese bigger than the moon.
In the afternoon I work shirtless, laying
strips of sod on the blind’s roof,
careful as my mother tiling her kitchen counter.
My uncles sit on campstools whacking at wasps
with rolled up Ducks Unlimited.
That evening I shot two limits: Blue wings
came in low over the decoys. I dropped
a lone Cinnamon at sundown. My uncles
napped on their bench, twitching.
Like old hunting dogs loaded with dreams.
received his B.A. and M.A. degrees in English (University of Kansas
1964, 1966) and M.F.A (University of Arkansas-Fayetteville 1970).
Career: Day has
published We Should Have Come by Water (Mammoth 2009), The
Committee to Save the World (Western Books 2009), Speaking French
in Kansas (Cottonwood Press 1989), and The Last Cattle Drive
(Putnam 1977). He taught at Fort Hays State University, Washington
College in Chestertown, Iowa Writers Workshop, University of Kansas, and
Montaigne College, The University of Bordeaux.
©2010 Denise Low AAPP
43 ©2010 Robert Day “Teal Hunting with Two Old Uncles”